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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 3, 2016 17:28:50 GMT -5
Well, it's 2016 and, prompted by the suggestions of a friend, I'm going to see if we can get this forum at least semi-active. So, this is for writing dares. Basically, whoever is interested can post pictures or quotes in turn and then everyone else (if they wish) will have one or two weeks to write a 300 word maximum scene that goes along with it. I'll post the first picture, but if you'd like to post something message me and I'll tell you when the next challenge will go up. Time and word limits are subject to change; all suggestions welcome.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 3, 2016 17:32:19 GMT -5
And here's the first picture found, of course, on Pinterest. So, write a short scene that goes with this picture. And I'd love your suggestions...should this just be a fun challenge or should it be a contest of sorts?
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Post by SierraJoanne on Jan 10, 2016 10:35:53 GMT -5
Cool idea! Would we post what we've written here?
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 11, 2016 7:10:56 GMT -5
Yes, post it here. I need to write something up for this too sometime this week.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 17, 2016 16:41:47 GMT -5
She was scared. More scared than she'd ever been in her life. Terrified would be a better term. Princess or slave girl, it didn't take more than the screams from outside the tent, the clash of steel, and the echoing curses to tell her that these men were mere mountain raiders. Or worse. They certainly weren't knights charging to the rescue from her father back in Vanya.
Her father. He'd probably forgotten her by now. He'd a dozen sons and even more daughters. What did one girl, more or less, matter in the end. He hadn't even remembered her name the last time he'd visited her and her siblings. The last time...it was nearly a year ago now. A year ago since she'd seen him; since she'd seen any of them. A year ago since she'd slipped from the palace in disguise, been caught by traders, and sold to this wandering tribe of horsemen.
She shivered, curling tighter on the floor behind the divan. They'd come for her. They'd find her and then...she shuddered. Death would be a mercy if half the rumors were true. Closing her eyes she took a deep breath, straining for the small grains of courage still hiding deep in her heart.
No.
She refused.
She'd not give in. Not this easily. Her father might have forgotten her. Her family; her people might have abandon her. But this would not be her fate, to be merely another casualty of the ruthless mountain bandits. She clenched her fist, the iron rings on her fingers cold against her palm.
She'd escape. She'd leave this place, leave this land. She'd find a place where she could live in peace; a palace where she was master of her own fate.
Slowly she raised her head, peering over the cushions toward the entrance of the tent. The screams had been replaced by crackling flames. Dark shadows passed between the canvas wall and the lurid light of the burning camp. Her tent would follow soon. Her life follow those of the others silenced outside.
It was time.
Whispering a prayer under her breath, she gathered her legs beneath her and then, refusing to give herself time to think, she leaped over the divan and sprang for the tent entrance.
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Post by ivyrose on Jan 18, 2016 22:08:13 GMT -5
Oooh, I like it. Nice work!
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 19, 2016 9:29:38 GMT -5
Thanks...it's a little over the word count, but not by too much.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Jan 26, 2016 7:28:48 GMT -5
Well, since no one is doing anything off that picture, here is another. And if anyone is interested in posting a picture of their own, just tell me.
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Post by SierraJoanne on Feb 3, 2016 21:12:03 GMT -5
"No!" He whispered, staring at himself in horror.
The metal slithered down his arms, hissing as it evaporated. He fell to the ground as the armor that had protected him, held him up, for so long cracked and turned to mist, until all that remained was the mask. It glinted one last time before dissolving and floating away as well.
He vaguely heard the sounds of battle around him, without him. He was useless. Crippled. As he had been before the mask had come along, taunting him with it's allure of power and wholeness.
There was a war cry in front of him, and he flicked his fingers dismissively, without concious thought, before realizing that the armor wouldn't protect him this time. He didn't even look up to meet the eyes of his soon-to-be killer
The sword screamed in victory as it began its descent. He braced himself.
And then something darted in front of him. The person who had intervened was dressed in white leather armor, with a sword that caught the little light and tossed it everywhere in sparkling shards. They dispatched his attacker- probably one of his own soldiers, he thought wryly -and grabbed his arm, pulling him to his feet. He gasped at the pain that stabbed at his legs, and tried to pull away. "Let me go!"
"Not a chance," she said, supporting him and dragging him from the cave.
Outside, he tugged himself angrily away from her grip. He nearly fell, but caught himself on the wall and held himself upright.
"What are you doing?" He leveled his most fearsome glare at her. "Who do you think you are?"
"My name is Sparrow." The girl said. "And I'm saving you."
"Who said I wanted saving?" He snarled, reaching for his sword only to find that it had dissolved along with his armor.
Sparrow shugged. "Nobody. Actually I believe I was specifically warned that you didn't want and weren't worth saving."
He scowled. "You're spilling nonsense."
Sparrow quirked a half smile. "I've heard that's a side effect of spending so much time around the Authors. Crazyness tends to rub off."
He stared at her. She was mad. Stark, blooming mad.
Sparrow waved a hand. "Regardless. Someone thought you were worth saving. So here I am." She bowed. "You're free of the mask. You aren't dead. You have a second chance- do with that what you will."
And then she turned and walked away, leaving him staring incredulously after her. Her words swirled. Not worth saving... Free of the mask... Second chance... Do with that what you will.
He slumped to the ground. You have a second chance. Do with that what you will
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Post by SierraJoanne on Feb 3, 2016 21:13:29 GMT -5
Oh dear, 448 words. I fear I went rather far over the word limit... :/
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Feb 5, 2016 11:06:48 GMT -5
Love it!
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Feb 6, 2016 17:15:08 GMT -5
Mine is 371...
“What have you done?” Magden staggered back as the dark figure withdrew his glittering blade from his chest. A weakness he’d not felt in an age and a half course through his veins. “I carry the blood of dragons. No mortal blade can slay me.” “Except this isn’t a mortal blade.” The moonlight glinted off a grimacing mask as the dark figure stepped to the edge of his cloaking shadows. He chuckled as Magden’s own blade slipped from his gauntleted fingers and he stumbled to one knee. “This blade is forged in the fires of Fate herself, and purged with the three-twined blood of king, dragon, and warrior.” Magden drew a sharp breath, blinking away a mist which hovered before his eyes. It couldn’t be…how, by all that was pure…? “There are few…who can wield such a blade.” The words fell between his labored breathing. “And only one who is as dark as I.” The figure lifted a booted foot, shoving Magden in the chest. Magden muffled a groan as he crumpled on the pavement of the narrow street. Gritting his teeth, he forced himself up on one elbow just as silver flashed in his vision. A mask clattered, spinning on the stones only inches from his face. Slowly Magden lifted his gaze to the cloaked figure as cold terror settled in his bones. “Darow.” The word fell from his lips like the name of death itself. The figure inclined his head slightly. “Didn’t think you’d recognize me after all these years.” “You thought I’d forget?” “It would have been better if you had.” Darow shrugged and sheathed his sword. “But greater things are breaking with the tide of night. Things you cannot stop. Or perhaps I should say, could not stop if you weren’t already dying.” He should have known…should have suspected. The rumors…the age of peace…it was never meant to last. Magden shook his head weakly as Darow turned away. He’d failed…failed again, and the united nations of Karisa would pay the price. Darkness swept about him, cloaking the dim lamps, cloaking the street, cloaking the retreating figure. But still he heard his nemesis’s final words, drifting with an evening breeze. “Good night for the final time, my brother.”
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Feb 8, 2016 11:26:09 GMT -5
One chance. He had one chance. The armor was failing, it wouldn't protect him much longer. The ancient enchantment was wearing thin, strained by betrayal and lies. Hylatha had warned him. She had told him it wouldn't last. But he hadn't thought it would end so soon. He needed more time.
He slowly sat up. His helmet cracked and fell to the floor. Gother stared at it in horror. He had several minutes before the end would come. He had known it would come sometime, it was unavoidable, but he wanted it to be much later. He steeled his muscles, willing himself to stand. He needed to get out before his protection was gone forever. A few more minutes, and he would be defenseless, helpless to escape and stop the evil that was darkening their world.
A scream escaped his lips as he straightened. The whip cuts on his back throbbed and burned, searing him with white fire. The strips of cloth wrapped around his forearm were once again stained with bright blood. His blood. Fire shot through his body again, sending him into spasms of pain.
Ethelyn. Think of Ethelyn. Her chestnut hair and green eyes. Her gentle smile and soothing voice. She was here, somewhere, and he had to save her before Traylor harmed her. The thought of his Ethelyn in the hands of that monster enfuriated him.
He scanned the walls of his prison, searching for the hidden latch Hylatha had assured him was there. He painfully stepped to the corner, feeling the stones for his way to freedom. There. He found it.
Gother pulled the lever. A stone fell away from the wall, revealing a dark crevice behind. A grinding sound from behind him told him the secret door was opening. He dropped to his knees and reached into the dark hole and pulled out a sword. His sword. Hylatha had kept her promise. His gauntlets cracked and hissed. He needed to leave, now.
Gother slowly turned and moved towards the hidden door, pushing himself on hands and knees, forcing his body through the flashes of fire, grinding his teeth against the pain. He needed to move faster. For Ethelyn's sake. He glanced up at the doorway, Horror gripped him and wrapped its cold fingers around his heart.
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Feb 8, 2016 11:33:39 GMT -5
That was a part of a book I'm in the process of planning for. I am currently working on two, both Christian fantasy, one called the Chosen Three, (working title) and the other part of a trilogy, Dawn, Dusk, and Deliverance, the one I'm working on being Dawn. I have been starting to write books for years, but never finishing them, but now I will finish them. I am a young Christian teen, and I enjoy writing very much. A few of my hobbies are writing, reading, quilling, and designing and creating fantasy style jewelry. Just like Hope, I like to collect shiny or cool things for story inspiration. I just started going to Hope's blog. You might see me on her caption challenge. I know this information might not seem relevant to this story challenge, but I just wanted to introduce myself. I will only be commenting on Mondays, and a very few other days, because that's the only time I have internet connection with my laptop; we don't have it in our home. Oh, and sorry I ended on a cliff-hanger. If you want to finish it, contact me here in a year or two.
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Feb 8, 2016 11:37:17 GMT -5
Oh, and I can't believe your picture matched, (mostly) the plot of my book. Myabe I can use that picture. Is it from Pinterest? If I don't reply to questions and such, or see your comments, it's because like I said, I only have the internet on Mondays, so sorry if you wrote a question or something and don't get an answer till Monday.
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