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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Mar 19, 2016 14:28:53 GMT -5
If it's OK with Hope, I'm all for it. I have such fun writing these short thing. Go for it!
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Mar 19, 2016 15:33:20 GMT -5
Sure!
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Post by bethany15 on Apr 3, 2016 12:29:10 GMT -5
Sorry that it took me a while to get back on here Here's the picture prompt...
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Post by bethany15 on Apr 3, 2016 12:30:42 GMT -5
I was also wondering if you ever come across a music video that makes the perfect writing propmt? I've found two good ones so far and if you would like to see them they are: The Proof of Your Love: For King and Country Darkest Part: Red
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 4, 2016 7:06:07 GMT -5
I love that picture! I'll have to look those music videos up. I have come across songs that make good prompts, like Not One of Us from Simba's Pride and Mordred's Lullaby. I love your profile picture, by the way.
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Apr 4, 2016 12:50:35 GMT -5
The wind whipped his hair wildly as he struggled to lift his sword. The trees were gripping, pulling, grasping his hands and legs, winding their way around his body, relentlessly pulling him deeper into the dark abyss. He couldn't hold on to his weapon. He dropped his face and turned against the wind. His cloak swirled around him, tearing in the gale. His eyes blurred and clouded over. Ice fell from the sky, pelting his face and neck, stinging his bare skin. Where had she gone? He had lost her. She was out here...somewhere...he had...to...find her. Move...you need...to...move. You'll...die...soon..." His mind screamed at him, echoing over and over the fear in his heart. "She's gone. I lost her. She's gone." The piercing cry of a bird broke through the wild winds. A messenger flacon swooped closer. Down it spiraled, fighting its way through the storm. At last it reached him and dropped a small broach into his hand. Her broach. "Where is she?" he screamed above the gusts of wind. "Show me!" The falcon cried again and leapt into the air, winging his way south. He forced strength into his muscles, willing himself away from the dark, gnarled fingers clawing at him. He stood and faced the wind. "I'll find you Eiwyn!" The yell burst from his chest with such power, it rang through the air and echoed through the valley. "I'm coming! I'll find you! Eiwyn!"
Wow. That picture is amazing. I don't know about music video, but if I want inspiration, then I listen to anything by Emily Black. She writes songs for her father's books. I especially like Strike of the Caralynx, and Maria.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 5, 2016 7:00:30 GMT -5
Wow, that was really intense, Anne. Love it!
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Post by bethany15 on Apr 5, 2016 19:50:03 GMT -5
That was awesome Anne!
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Apr 6, 2016 21:54:15 GMT -5
Thank you! I LOVE writing these short little things. And now I have a bajillion (yes, I accept that as a real word) new story ideas that I'm trying to write down and then ignore for a couple years while I finish my novellas thanks to Hope and you Bethany. I especially like my one for the griffin picture. I love writing like that.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 7, 2016 19:12:58 GMT -5
I love writing short scenes too. I can write short scenes, and I can write books and novellas, but I can't write short stories well.
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 9, 2016 14:02:25 GMT -5
By the way, Bethany, I love The Proof of Your Love. Can you tell me if you find any more good ones?
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 9, 2016 14:53:21 GMT -5
I've based the setting of this story off my Song of the Sword...though this probably took place about 100 years before that story.
He should have known. He should have guessed. The finding of the legendary wingmaster’s blade should have given him more than a hint that something was wrong. But the late spring snow, the early darkness, and the encroaching mist sweeping through the Melody Realm had been enough to deal with. Even drawing on the power of the song in the Melody, it had been all I could do to beat the joy stealing fog back towards the south. It had been an everyday enough occurrence that I should have known the sword was for something else. Something worse. But I’d relaxed. I’d attended the celebration like a normal citizen of Aslaria instead of one of the few who knew about, much less could entered, the reflection realm of song. And I’d left the sword in my lodging. The swift beat of Frithren’s wings during a jubilant dance was the first sign something was terribly wrong. He’s here. The words sent ice though my veins and I pulled away into the shadows even as the lamps flickered out. And, under the startled cries, which I knew would soon turn to pleas of fear, I could hear the heavy drumbeat of the traitor’s song. The traitor. As I dashed into the night, snow falling gently around my, I racked my brains but could come up with no name to couple to the shadow who had been sweeping though the country. A rumor, may thought it was. I’d thought it was. Except he was real. And he was here. I snatched up the wingmaster’s sword, my vision blurring then clarifying as I saw the real realm and the Melody at once. My chest tightened as I glimpsed the mist, seeping in about the castle walls. But there was no time to deal with it now. Summoning the song, I dashed back to the great hall. Silence met my ears. Silence, mingled with the recent memory of bloodshed and weeping. And the traitor’s faint song. I choked at the sight. The motionless bodies. The stained floor. The lifeless hall. I staggered back outside, my sword hanging limply from my hand. Frithren’s wings beat against the air and I turned, lifting my hand for the messenger falcon. He’s headed south. Frithren declared grimly. I nodded and swallowed hard, then closed my eyes. The Prince forgive me. I’d been given the sword, and I’d failed before I’d even started. I’d failed, but more would die unless I could stop the shadow. Clenching the sword, I took a deep breath, then turned toward the south. And I ran. Ran through the night. Though the snow. Though the mist. Though the song. With death behind me, danger ahead, and an oath throbbing though my blood, I ran towards the fulfillment of my doom.
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Post by Anne of Lothlorien on Apr 11, 2016 9:51:02 GMT -5
I watched the Proof Of Your Love. It almost made me cry! So sad, yet triumphant at the end. Yes, I want to hear more. Hope, that was amazing. I just got your story, and if this is anything like it, I can tell it's going to be great!
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Post by HopeAnnSchmidt on Apr 11, 2016 17:42:06 GMT -5
Thanks, Anne. I feel like making a legend or something about the character in the short scene I wrote. I like him already...I just need to figure out what happened.
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Post by SierraJoanne on Apr 14, 2016 18:37:29 GMT -5
Ooh, I love the Proof of Your Love music video! I wish there were more cool music videos out there like it :/ I have a ton of songs I love as story inspiration, but none of them seem to have cool music videos.
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